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May 01, 2014

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Poem Body

'hark my heart stops
stress stalks me
I sweat helplessly....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 12 months ago

Though my heart doth beat strongly
Your words fell short as title displayed
If thou doth require correction
Pray take to you my words:-

Hark my heart doth stop
stress stalks me on silent wings
I sweat helplessly.

Love to our one Loved
That he should toil unaided
When our help is nigh,

Yours Ian.T

loved

tis best to traverse
on known sands
than walk across drier grass ...
I shall limit to my hall of fame
lest I earn greater ...defame