Poem Body
Collectively cornered
against
the wall
while all my
thickening thoughts
begins to
fall into
A reticently
rambling refrain.
Erratically
rustling
through that
perilous
passageway.
Where every
faint flicker
in the dense
dwellings
of the dark
Just decides
to fade away.
Comments
Against The Wall
Hello, Edward,
I feel the anxiety here, from the title to the amazing final two lines.
Always good to see your unique, wonderful work.
L
Thank you
I was inspired to write this by the song the edges of the world from fun home.
Which gave me the image of man who is delicately dwindling into a downfall.
https://youtu.be/in_ZRAguDLQ
Describes the feeling...
very well!
L