And then we woke and forgot anything ever happened

Poem Body

The night fell in all white and strong
A whistling through the window's song
No hurry to her resting place
Came stealing steps from days long race

She offered up a healing calm
A note or two from nature's psalm
With trees all wrapped in street light glow
She sang a tune we used to know

As time took moment for a pause
And freed us from our daily laws
A silence came and held the land
And let us sleep all hand-in-hand

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Henry Rollins, Langston Hughes, Emily Dickinson

Comments

Local use of Rhyme

great poem....
love that poets are moving towards
rhyme
the mystical feel of this one
is suspenseful

metaphors galore
kinda gleeful
in readin it

symbolism and mythologies

Thank U eightmenout

Mr Wolf!

Thank you, sir for the kind

Thank you, sir for the kind words. Appreciate you taking the time