Poem Body
A ballerina
blissfully bended
in blue
reaches out
into the
overbearing
embrace of
empty space .
Hopelessly
hankering for
the fondness
of a familiar face
to set all her
life’s pieces
back into
place .
Jul 26, 2022
A ballerina of blue
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Amazing as usual
You’re a good poet. That is all,
Tim
Thank you
My inspiration https://youtu.be/bELgmDwW5d8 and https://youtu.be/9nSaxXh6J_o
you are still a very good poet ...O kid
your poetry is meritorious
You have read me
earlier
Thank you
I wrote this while being bed bound and listening to music which helps illuminate an idea in my head . Was listening to the song round and round and it gave me the image of a blue ballerina.
very good
I am deaf
but listen little well
with earphones
Listen to a song BY NORAH JONES ...COME AWAY WITH ME ...
ALSO SEE AMERICAN AUDITIONS
IT helps in passing time
when one is confined
all the best young bold man
Thank you friend
Yes I usually listen to music on low volume because i have sensory issues I don’t like loud noises
I usually just listen to the beginning of the song ,
AS you wish
I can follow all limitations of guys like us
Take care
Edward
Just one little suggestion , if I may instead of bended try bends an see if you like that any better, Good title
I would have...
used [bent]. I really like the wishing for a fond face to help with the putting of
her life's pieces back in place.I can see the face, huge with beautiful blue eyes
in the tiny ballerina's perspective.The ballerina being one on top of a music-box
playing tinkly-music and the ballerina going 'round and 'round. Nice vision. ~ Geez.
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