raj
Dec 03, 2018
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Belief

Poem Body

Bubbles in my head. make feet tap again
before they go cold, like stories untold,
like my sparrow's feet, at your cabin door.

Hoping you'll follow,
the trail before it fades,
like the candle I left, by your door step.

Come. find me in the wild,
stoking for us a fire,
where waiting for you, doesn't tire.

If the candles get doused,
by a fateful wind,
don't let the cinders turn to ash.

Each Christmas Eve.
I will knock on your cabin door,
lighting more candles, in belief_

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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