Bit by bit with passion

Poem Body

You first just cup my face
then draw me closer
as my heart beat does increase,
you wipe off my tears
and kiss
we hug more with grater force
as you then pull me closer
you press me all over
you want us to strip
bit by bit

we both do
our bodies’ burn within
you leave no distance
bit by bit
we strip

there is no breeze
the car does freeze
as you rip
and witnesses us drip
we hug more
ere the car moves along
the forest alone knows
we just made love together

you start all over
we strip
bit by bit
your thrusts hurt with pleasure
all is left to imagination for ever

when we are glued
bit by bit
we strip
we strip…..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Beautiful comedy sketch

This is hilarious . I love comedy poetry - sometimes it's the only thing between despair and outrage. This made me smile and reminded me so much of they guy who made Young Frankenstein and Blazing Saddles. I loved it. Do you specialise in comedy . It seems quite a few do on this site .That's what i like about it , people don't take themselves too seriously. I may have to lighten up here myself too.