judyanne
judyanne
Nov 01, 2010

blind optimism

Poem Body

There’s something to this going blind.
Although one doesn’t see so right
light plays a trick and gives a gift
(presumably to compensate for our poor failing sight)
we discover when we gaze at the heavens
and things which illuminate the night.

Such as eyes of a flying jet plane.
When one is compromised in sight
those lights are amazingly bright
they send out rays like a Christmas star
flying through the heights.

If I stare straight at a twinkling star
its smudge turns into two or three
thousand points of searching pinpricks
beaming down at me.

Venus fairly glows and sparkles
much brighter when I don’t use my specs
and Mars looks like a huge red
five pointed asterisk.
With my glasses on they are just tiny
twinkling gems against the black briny.
When I take them off each presents
a huge beaming radiating disc.

And the moon, well what can I say?
When she’s full especially and I look her way
I see a huge glowing golden ball
(and sometimes there are two of them)
blazing across the Milky Way
which itself blends and fuses painted clusters of jewels
in the act of self-dissemination
forming a kaleidoscope of colourful pools
to wend and arch lazily overhead
from horizon to horizon.

So there’s something to this going blind....

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Comments

lou

lou

14 years 5 months ago

I like the idea, that life becomes more interesting when you have to use your imagination.

love lou

judyanne

without my glasses my imagination runs riot
love judy
xxxx

Victorclaude

Judy,

And to think that you can do all this without psychedelics. My eyes are growing old, too.
Cataracts are creeping up on my eyes, or into them. Some of what you describe in this poem sounds like cataracts. Anyway, I enjoyed the read.

I will be back for more!

Ciao,

Victor

judyanne

cataracts eh? sounds like my luck....
thanks for the visit, glad you enjoyed it
love judy
xxxx

S

I am not going to critique this work as the depth of its feeling says it all.........scribbler

judyanne

lovely to see you again
thanks for the read
love and hugs
judy
xxxx

Nordic cloud

Ah ever the poet to find something in this phenomenon,
we are not content with grumbling, we seek compensation
and find we can write about it, paint it in our minds as
something magically interesting, we are the lucky ones,
who can imagine things beyond the factual commonplace
and doing so even take others with us into that realm
of fantasy. You can anyway judyanne.

Love annanya