Can I breathe?

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Your poem effectively conveys a sense of overwhelming anxiety and self-doubt. The repetition of "I'm sorry" emphasizes the feeling of constantly apologizing for one's existence. The imagery of being scared to even breathe adds a powerful layer to the poem. To enhance your piece, consider exploring the root of this anxiety further or delving into the internal conflict in more detail. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices like metaphors or varied line structures could further enrich your poem.

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This is outstanding!I know exactly how you feel!

my only concern here is that you need to exchange the word ( breath for breathe) that is the only thing wrong and it is a small matter of spelling. I very much like this poem because I can fully relate to it!

*hugs, Cat

I felt and related to this so deeply. I have often felt this way as if my existence should be one big apology. This conveyed those feelings in a beautiful way.