Come let’s scream..edit

Like a playtex Bra I have lifted and separated:-
Come let’s scream

So many times i have seen you,
In my dreams.
Without out nothing. (Double negative plus typo)
So many times you must have seen me too,
With nothing. (Not sure if with nothing makes sense)
Yet you love me.
That’s what wonders me.
Will you like me as in my dreams?
Or would you love to daily scream,
With me?
Without nothing . (Double negative)
Oh tell me, oh tell me,
Tell me please
Why do you come more often?
Only in my dreams?
Come during day hours
When I to love scream, (Needs Edit sounds wrong)
Make it your lovely dream .
Come now let's both together scream.
You will have to do your own edit but the layout you have is very unreadable, just be careful of the double negatives as your without nothing means you have something, Take care young Bard the theme is fine,
Yours Ian.T

I have a problem calling this poem because it isn't broken up into verses and stanzas. It's a like a paragraph of prose, very poetic writing, but prose still, with very many ellipses. But I like the content, I just don't know if it makes a poem...not that I want you to change it or anything.

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Woow! This poem is packed with passion! And what an invitation! I agree with above comments - but I really love the idea of screaming together!

I know I'm being cheeky! but here's my take on it. - This is only my interpretation! ignore if so desired.

So many times I have seen you in my dreams..
So many times you must have seen me too.
I have nothing and yet I know you love me!
So I wonder..Do you want me, just in my dreams?
Or would you love to daily scream..with me? Oh tell me!
Tell me, tell me please.
Why do you often come, only in my dreams?
Come during daylight hours.
Make me your dream..come now, let's both together scream!

You have a gift for conveying emotion!

Love Mand xxxx

I like it better :)

Me too! :)