Mallory
Mallory
Jun 02, 2018

AT THE COMPETITION

Poem Body

Since the timing
Men still waiting for the great harvest
The eternal begin the giving of corn and the wheat long time ago
Where many dignitaries in this world shall never enter the gate
But shall go by their knees weeping
Some who will be left behind will not they be stained
But they will brought to shame
They shall be consume by fire
And finally become a heap under the sun

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria abjua, NGA

Favorite Poets: Christopher Okigbo. Williams Shakespeare. J.P Clark. Wole Soyinka

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Comments

Mallory

I knew your judgments here and the're all 100% correct. I think the verse needs a language overhauling for the second time.

That is why i am in Neopoet family. Each and every one us needs 'A Godfather' here that would constantly receive from...especially literary corrections at any point in time.

Thanks Mr Markl for the read and having time to unveil the weeds within the poem.