Lavender
Lavender
Aug 26, 2023

Conversing With A Vending Machine

Poem Body

We haven't spoken for
a while,
I see you haven't changed much.
You with your cloying carbohydrates
dangling
in pernicious wrappings
like chocolate kisses
whispering
sweet nothings
to palates
too smitten
to walk away.

You woo everyone,
don't you,
with fleeting pleasure.

The hungry, the thirsty,
the anxious, and the bored,
promising fulfillment,
contentment,
even
merciful friendship.

But we both know
you stand a bit
taller,
don't you,
when they bow down
to your dishonorable
enticements.

Someone should pull your
dirty, little plug,
hang a
"Danger - Highly Toxic" sign
on your greasy, sly face
with a petition that screams,

"Gimme back my life, ya filthy animal!"

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Triskelion

...a real talent for taking the ordinary and revving it up with an awesome use of vocabulary. This is a playful portrait of confronting a self's weaknesses and taking it out on an inanimate object. The personification is classic.

Thomas

Lavender

Sometimes I feel it carries a bit more depth to write TO something, rather than ABOUT something. I really enjoy personifying.
Thank you so much for reading!
L

C

You have identified the essence of vending machines and their place in our lives- not always for the bearer!
Good job,

paul Bartoswicz

Takes me back to my days in the Navy, where many meals came from vending machines, how I hated them but loved them at the same time, grabbing a quick meal at the military airlift command (MAC) while crisscrossing the country.

Lavender

I can understand Navy vending machines, and why you both hated and loved them. Makes more sense. I visited a hospital and saw a vending machine full of "stuff" contrary to healing. Frustrating...
Thank you for reading!
L