Cosmic

Poem Body

In the shadows lurks a desire
to seek the naked truth
of free spirit.
Stepping out it's energized
to dwell in the cosmos
for ever after.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Hi April

Thanks again for reading and your good words...This not being a haiku/senryu/sonnet I haven't consciously kept track of the syllable count...please feel free to make suggestion if that would help improve meter / cadence...appreciate your stopping by friend..
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Cosmic

It Is... I mean the idea and the theme of this little gem.

Thanks Rula

for reading and your comment..
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