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Mar 26, 2014

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Give credit to the creator....
we all are such ones ....each one of us …you too are a creator of likes ...
even if you can’t comment or don’t wish to...

We all share in this world what little we know....
Let egos be shelved
and help share what others know.....

I am a creature of sharing...by now all do know....
share that I know ...and what through my eyes does flow
as a butterfly flies and glows ...the candle -----its life blows....

So too I shall be extinguished
upon veils of time.....
Let me share what is mine.... and what is thine.... to create a veritable gold mine.....for mankind ......

-----as we pass away ...from this way ....never ever to return I may that boldly say ....
have your own impressions any way....

I’m just a passerby from time’s path...
you may, if you wish
and can do stay
I shall soon fly away...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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If this poem is about what I think it is, it should give solace to one who is hurting right now..........stan