Poem Body
Igniting my engine,
I started wheeling
in the lanes between my ears
from a state of inertia
fueled by a desire
for a smooth drive
slowing down at the bends
without needing to brake
driving at a steady pace
to the rhyme of my engine
i lost count of the miles
didn't know how far is left to go
then pulled up at the sign
reading "Welcome to Writers Block"
forcing me to pull up
having reached the dead end
muttering in vain
"what a waste"
looking around for a coffee shop
to refresh and have a leak
Comments
Welcome
to writer's block, but don't surrender to it
I think the first stanza needs to be reworked.
Your title is expressive. I liked the use of simile through out. I can relate to this dear raj as my life is really choatic these days. Hope it won't last for long.
Thanks Rula
for reading and commenting. I will see what can be done on the first stanza. Wishing that whatever is causing chaos in your life gets resolved quickly..Good to see you back...
Be well dear friend...
Hi Teddy
Appreciate your taking time to read and thank you for your comment
be well..