Desire to hold

OK this one just leaves my mind in a knot. Please don't interpret that as negative.

I think it was just how you put the words together. To me there is no flow in the words. It's like one wall after another. I get the feel that the idea is constantly changing in the mind of the narrator. But who knows I could be wrong.

I get what the poem is trying to say but it becomes a little confusing. However, the piece itself feels like the early stage of an idea or a certain emotion. It's like when you have an epiphany. You completely understand it in your head, but you don't quite have all the words to describe what is going on.

I hope I got something right. If not, then please excuse my mad ramble and give me your take.

Not often that my mind gets all up in a knot. But there is something good about this one, and I liked it very much.

Well, let me hold you! We have many things to hold what all you want to hold just let me know when you yourself are held, no one will let you go without breaking a weld so hold on I shall await a message from you till then I shall hold on my prettiest one on to you! Well, let me hold you! We have many things to hold what all you want to hold just let me know when you yourself are held, no one will let you go without breaking a weld so hold on I shall await a message from you till then I shall hold on my prettiest one on to you!

It is prose, not poetry.