Drifting day by day

Poem Body

We lift our
errant eyes
waking up
to the blissful
bluebird skies.
Where there
dawns
another day
faintly
flickering
itself away .

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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Drifting Day by Day

Hello, Edward,
So gentle, peaceful, and calm. I know you are usually inspired by music. Is that the case with this?
Thank you,
L

https://youtu.be/f2cKAbqWMLg
The song gave me the idea
of how one day fades then bleeds back into another but I know wouldn’t last forever so you better enjoy each day to the fullest because don’t know when your final day will fade.

Beautiful!

Precious.
Thank you,
L

How true...

you never know. I like the thought process here. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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Thank you

I try to give my advice or feelings thoughts within the form of my poems hoping it would build up an impact and be remembered . And I try to write it sincerely because it’s what I believe is the truth. Thank you geezer .