Each On Reach One

Poem Body

Put yourself second
Aid those in need
You can make a difference

If everybody
Took a moment

For someone else
On this planet
Radical change
Would Occur
And everyone would be
Rewarded some
Day

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is an acrostic.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Comments

So good to see you and you know I love you but...

(that sounds ominous at the beginning of a crit, eh, it is)
Sorry to fuck up your acrostic but don't ever preach, mate, please.

I put myself second
Aid those in need
I can make a difference

If everybody
Took a moment

To stop those destroying
This planet
and make them pay
Radical change
Would Occur
And the reward would be
the survival of our species.

Thanks for the sound crit.

always welcomed. good to be back. God to see you around.

In ink,
Dabbler

Funny, I didn't take this to be preaching, just a reminder to humanity that by putting others first, the world would be a better place. I also whole heartedly agree with your version Weirdelf, to me, the message didn't matter which person it was written in.
Jx