Epitaph

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem "Epitaph". The brevity of the poem is striking and the use of humor in the last line adds a unique touch to the overall tone. However, I would suggest considering the following points to further enhance the poem:

1. Consider adding more details about Obadiah's life or personality to make the poem more personal and engaging. This will help the reader connect with the subject of the poem and make the epitaph more memorable.

2. The poem's structure is simple and straightforward, which works well for the message you are conveying. However, you could experiment with different poetic forms or techniques to add more depth and complexity to the poem.

3. The use of the word "un-punctured" is clever, but it may not be immediately clear to all readers. Consider rephrasing the line to make the meaning more accessible.

Overall, "Epitaph" is a witty and concise poem that leaves a lasting impression. With a few

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Obi, at his best. Love it. Ruby :)

Excellent!
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I just roared laughing, what an absolutely magnificent epitaph.

Just think 100's of years from now some unknowing explorer would come past your grave and you'd have them ptmsl!!!

I think this ones absolutely brilliant, I will visit more I need more smiles in my days.

Bravo!!!

love Jayne x