raj
Oct 23, 2018

Fashion U Turn

Poem Body

a stone washed jeans with holes
considered fashionable and bold
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is a tag line that is sold

men don't mind it at all
might even have a ball
if long skirts go short
none would ever snort

winter does bring a change
long's in fashion once again
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it's mittens n red noses

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

IRiz

IRiz

6 years 6 months ago

I love the mittens and red noses
You make me look forward to winter!

Crisp air, early frost,
bright sun falls
right trough the naked branches

Children and their moms smile
Cheeks like fresh apples

R

good to know you liked the line "it's mittens and red noses"...so get ready for winter which as you have said is almost knocking on your door...
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