Poem Body
Away we go
sliding
through the
sleek silken
fields of snow .
that grows
out a
golden guilded glow.
cementing
into our hearts
several
subliminal streams
of serenity.
That had
hid itself away
from the insidious
sight seekers of
suburbia.
Comments
hello Edward,
instead of golden gilted glow, try (golden gilded glow)
hello Edward,
I like your poem...it made perfect sense to me, except the part about suburbia.
*hugs, Cat
I reread the poem,
and even that part made good sense to me.
Thank you
What I meant by that part was that it’s beauty was kept safe away from the modernization and industrialization of humanity .