mand
mand
Oct 12, 2013
This poem is part of the workshop:

The Bottom Line

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First attempt at Dactylic - bottom line workshop

Poem Body

Beautiful, bountiful, beleaguered princesses,
tortured and tormented, exhibit tolerance.
Patiently, presenting amazing fortitude.                           
Constantly forgiving horrible attitudes.

Beau..ti..ful / boun..ti..ful, / bel..eagu..ered / prin..cess.es,
tor..tured and / tor..ment..ed, / ex..hib..it / tol..er..ance.
Pa..tient..ly / pre..sent..ing / am..a..zing / for..ti..tude.
Con..stant..ly / for..giv..ing / horr..i..ble / att..i..tudes.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: GBR

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Comments

mand

Been trying, but not having much success. I manage to embolden the stressed words, using control B, but when I try to save it goes badly out of line. I suspect I'm doing something wrong. All part of the learning process I guess. It's o.k I managed it!

Rula

Rula

11 years 6 months ago

first line
Bea-uti-ful|, boun-ti-ful,| be-lea-guered |prin-cess- es ,(prin-CESS-es)
Second line
tor-tured and| tor-ment-ed,| ex-hi-bit| to-le-          rance          .(to-LE-rence)
third line
Pa-tient-ly|, pre-sen-ting| ama-z-ing |for-tit-ude.  
fourth line                       
Con-stan-tly |for-gi-ving |ho-rri-ble |a-tti-tudes 

Rula

Rula

11 years 6 months ago

the advanced formating sometimes goes mad and refuse to remove the format. I used to CAPITAL for the accented and the small for non-accented.