faerybeki
faerybeki
Mar 17, 2012

The Fog

Poem Body

There are times
still
when the fog
rolls in
and you can't see
for sheer
density

You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you

but that is ok

Being lost
in the fog
brings it's own
beauty

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

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Country/Region: GBR

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Comments

Candlewitch

You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you

WOW!!!

always, Cat

Esker

Esker

13 years 1 month ago

what intuition spoke of
guiding

overwhelmned till the site
becomes the vision
bright and soft
fulfilling focus

memories sometimes tricky
like a compass spinning
we rely on gifts
this lost momentum
like flying in a cloud