Poem Body
Foolhardy lovers
They all fall in love
on Face Book
or any sites....
all those who so appear
are not themselves in reality...
many are the humming birds
some chasing living ghosts
some are mad in their musings
thinking them to be shadows
who and why
should they just fall in love
with creatures so strange
they will never meet ever
I say
that again and again
love abounds in hearts two
if one is known
another is new
but both should feel the urge
the desire
the instinct to fall in love
with just someone’s ink
in liquid or poetic form
whatever it may be
Love between strangers
is maddening
isn't it really....
Comments
Wow!
When he is bad he terrible, but when he is good he is brilliant.
My reading:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Wei63MiOip
I love your imagery
your compliment
if it was meant to be so
Jess ....
without you I am like a Rose
without a stem of thorns
of what use !
it was meant to be
a compliment
grateful
and thankful
urs
pupil
Loved
At last one of those grand pieces that we have waited so patiently for,
Then you question Jess on what he said "I love your imagery"
Come on it was sincere just say sorry and thank him for the compliment lol.
Well written young Bard lets have some more of these and broaden your experiences in writing of other facets of your life's Sojourn, Yours Ian.T
bUt of course my guide
by you I ought to abide
Jess gladly
took my right side
and I cried
brilliant said he
!!!!!
thank thee
Loved
I believe this is one of your better poems. I liked it...
if i may suggest some changes in stanza 2, it could be
many are the humming birds
some chasing living ghosts
some are mad in their musings
thinking them to be shadows
just a thought...
Regards,
thanks for your suggestion
you know
I always accept
shall consider
we learn thanks friend raj