faithmairee
faithmairee
Jun 20, 2011

forever yours

Poem Body

should the moon
retreat forever
behind a darkened sky
and all the stars
fall earthbound
without their
twinkling light
if the sun should
cease to rise
the clouds go
their separate ways
and all the birds
no longer soar
i still will
not forget you
for, in all truth
i am forever yours

About This Poem

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About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

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Comments

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raj

13 years 10 months ago

a lovely dedication for a loved one expressing unconditional love..

much love..

faithmairee

Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them very much.

Love,

Faith

Eduardo Cruz

It seems that you like to write in 'enjambment" good stuff here, I enjoyed it much!

Eddie