A grizzled grazed grin

Poem Body

A Grizzled Grazed
grin gradually
growing back
into that
Innocently insecure
soul. Who once
heedfully hemmed
his half hummed
hopes within
the wistfully
withering
waters of
wonderment .

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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Comments

Yeah...

sometimes, we regret the time spent in ignorance, but when we realize our innocence gone...
Your alliteration is first rate! Nicely done.
~ Geez.
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A Grizzled Grazed Grin

Hello, Edward,
I agree with Geezer.
Well done!
L

Thank you

I was inspired by the Harry Chapin song the same sad singer which painted an image of meeting a old friend seeing that they’re to say something and apologize but all you’re left with is silence.

https://youtu.be/jTJIpbHnRMM