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This poem has a strong sense of emotion that is effectively communicated through the use of personal imagery and a conversational tone. The rhyme scheme and the use of repetition help to create a cohesive structure that flows nicely. The imagery of waking up in the middle of the night and being swept away without a sigh create a powerful image of loneliness and despair. However, the last line of the poem, "you could have just said poet Good Bye," could be improved by changing it to "you could have just said, 'Good Bye, poet.'" This change provides a more direct reference to the speaker and more effectively communicates their sadness at the lack of recognition for their work. Overall, this poem is an effective expression of emotion and is a great example of how poetic form can be used to communicate powerful messages

Hello, Lovedly,
Be well!
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