Santa
Nearly
Overturned
While
Sleighing
Through
Ominous
Reckless, rolling, rumbling, roaring, ransacking
Mayhem!
Dec 05, 2023
Ho, Ho, Hold On!
Poem Body
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
This is fantastic
I absolutely love what you did with this challenge. The added humor made my early morning! I can just see the sled tumbling and turning and the chaos that ensued as a result. Great job.
Hello, Carrie,
Poor Santa! Thank you for reading - glad you felt the chaos!
L
Loved it, great fun, Ruby :)
Loved it, great fun, Ruby :) xx
Hello, Ruby,
I had fun writing this!
Thank you for reading!
L
This certainly...
got my smile machine going this morning! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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Hello, Geezer,
I'm glad it made you smile!
Thanks for reading!
L
WOW!
what an amazing Acrostic!!!
*hugs & holiday cheer, Cat
Hello, Cat,
Thank you for reading and sharing your sweet comment!
L
Reminds Me of A Song...
This reminds me of a song: Grandma Got Run Over By A Reindeer! Fun. Good job.
Hello, Steve,
Yep! "As for me 'n Grandpa, we believe!" It was probably during a storm - of some sort!
Thank you for the chuckle!
L
Holiday mayhem
Reading this was saying ‘wow that escalated quickly’ lol felt myself actually tumbling
Holiday mayhem
Reading this was saying ‘wow that escalated quickly’ lol felt myself actually tumbling
Hello, Tawny,
What a crazy ride a snowstorm can cause!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
L
IT'S SMILE TIME! Thanks for
IT'S SMILE TIME! Thanks for sharing. - Will
Hello, Will,
I'm so happy you enjoyed this little ditty. Bit of rambunctious fun!
Thank you for reading!
L
Thank you, Mark!
Quite a lot of fun with this one!
L