lou
lou
Mar 06, 2012

Junk

Poem Body

Motivation pulverised deep within a low down beat
With snapping fingers and a saturday night strut
Mr high slides by.

He is filled with arrogance and swagger
He's indestructible 
A ladies man, a mans man, he seduces them all

Then he has them and the mask slips
His grip is vice like
Deathly it's hold.

His evil Hand drags them down 
Into the bowels of the beast
Leaves them there to drown.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Comments

Nordic cloud

Is this "on the darkside" group lou?
For it is indeed dark.

I love this:-
"Motivation pulverised deep within a low down beat
With snapping fingers and a saturday night strut
Mr high slides by."

Not Mr Hyde?
Nordic cloud

Candlewitch

another great write. I am in awe. I wouldn't change a word of it!

always, Cat