Poem Body
Do you all know,
one day yet
to one's birthday
one is a child
and
a day after the 18th birthday
one becomes a man(woman)
now tell me
a crime committed on a day
short of 18
one is dealt with
like one was a kid
and
a day after he cuts the eighteenth slice
he becomes a man
then what is his position
as he cuts the cake
and
pierces his ex
will you treat him
as a man
o tell me
fair man!
Comments
Loved
If he's cutting the cake he's already there, in my world we don't cut cakes until we are that age so he would be a man in my eyes,
I get the feeling that this was a comment am I right ?
love JC xxx
no just a wild thought
a legal interpretation of sorts
asked by a fan
from across
thanks
Aren't a lot of poems wild
Aren't a lot of poems wild thoughts? smile
JC x
Mostly
aren't most poets wild?
smiles to u too!
Even bigger smile, I was a
Even bigger smile, I was a wild child once upon a time.
love JC x
I an still
even now a
WILDERNESS
CHILD