loved
loved
May 13, 2014

Lover's note

Poem Body

no one owns you
by now
so many would have shared
but one truth you convey
love alone can be shared

in real earnestness
when two souls are compared
to a pair of flowers
swaying in the sunny breeze

you two give us all such a thought
as one's love
is in the air
who soever may we be
do with us your secret love share

then notes we will compare
who amongst us
is a better pair

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

weirdelf

Lovers do not compare the better pair.

weirdelf

"then notes we will compare
who amongst us
is a better pair"