Poem Body
I lonesomely lay
amongst the
mournful mounds
of mud and clay.
Ghastly growing
grim and grey
Inattentively
tumbling down
towards tears .
But too crushed
to crack and cry
away my
fervid flood of
selfless fears.
Comments
Lying amongst mournful mounds
Hello, Edward,
You and your poetry are rare and wonderful gifts to us all.
Thank you for the amazing creativity you bring to us.
Best,
L
I do believe you are the King of Alliteration.
Thank you
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/4NniLKzNMMI
I put myself in my writing usually my thoughts and feelings.
Like the line my fervid flood of selfless fears now what I mean by selfless is that I’m afraid to stay and watch everyone slowly fade away leaving me alone with only company I endure being the empty essence of open air.
Company...
that I can only endure, not of which I crave. I understand that perfectly! Sometimes, we cannot escape the company that just means we are not alone. Very well written. ~ Geez.
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