Poem Body
What are flowers
seen through eyes
which never felt
love inside the heart
what is snow
if never white
but ashes
falling from the sky
what if love
was like a lark
flying fast
into the dark
if you never held
one and not the other
who can say how
life can have a tether
Comments
Eddie
thought provoking poem I would hve enjoyed reading on but you cut it short would love to see this ex[panded a bit more What indeed
Chrys,
That is all That came out of me, and you are right it did end abruptly to me too.
Unfortunately I have nothing else for this right now. Maybe a re-visit at a later time may spark something. Well we could collaborate, If you see something you can add with out change the message.
which is, "love is what keeps us alive"
Thank you so much for your comment and realizing what happen with the write!
Eddie C.