Gentle
caress on
naked soles
Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs
Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds
Gentle
caress on
naked soles
Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs
Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds
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Comments
What
a clever play with words here raj.
If I am not wrong this tells much about the beauty of nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
Regards
You are spot on Rula. The
You are spot on Rula. The give away is in the last two words :) Thanks for being a rare visitor to my posts...
It's always
a great pleasure dear raj!
You are a so talented poet. I read you not only to enjoy but also to learn.
Thank you!
Heartfelt thanks Rula for
thanks from my heart Rula for your kind words...
I do likewise with your posts too and almost always there are some good take aways...
AND I have been wating like Rula says
yeah following since last millenia
yet I am unable to learn
and
poetry like you raj
churn
when will my mind burn
hopefully in its own turn