raj
Feb 28, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Morning Walk [Sunku WS]

Poem Body

Gentle
caress on
naked soles

Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs

Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Rula

Rula

7 years 1 month ago

a clever play with words here raj.
If I am not wrong this tells much about the beauty of nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

Regards

R

You are spot on Rula. The give away is in the last two words :) Thanks for being a rare visitor to my posts...

Rula

Rula

7 years 1 month ago

a great pleasure dear raj!
You are a so talented poet. I read you not only to enjoy but also to learn.
Thank you!

R

thanks from my heart Rula for your kind words...

I do likewise with your posts too and almost always there are some good take aways...