Mute Question (Tanka Couplet)

Poem Body

How did they make love
which seed did make her conceive
was it truly fruit

the fruit could sate her hunger
not the one which makes a child

it is a story
moms and dads make us believe
to put us to sleep

while Eve did eat an apple
did Adam pick her cherry?

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

great questions! the end caught me by surprise and I LOL'd

*hug, Cat
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thanks for your visit ..it was in response to Teddy urging me to write about Adam and Eve...so i tried...

hugs...

*hug, Cat
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thanks for re visiting and your comment...:)

hugs...

I was caught by surprise as much as Cat was! Funny that! LMAO. ~ Geez.
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thank for your time....good to know you liked it and it made you LMAO :)

you wanted me to do write something on Adam and Eve...so i tried to...good to know you liked it ...found it though provoking and loved the ending...

thanks...

you devil you.

thanks for your visit...i take being called a "devil" in a good way :) good to know it made you laugh...

be well...