my knew friend

Poem Body

I have this knew and reel good friend
he's come too help me with my rights
my poems and my prose, shortly
will aspirate too grater heights

I now know longer kneed worry
if weather I have spilt things write

I can rely on my knew friend
to watch four me four for spilling slights
sew now my talent will a crew
and I'll right stuff of pure delights

with not a care I might mis-do
(and know kneed now four dumb re-rights).

ewe sea, with this knew reel good friend
I feel it's like I've hit bingo
In future rites, with nil ado
accomplished spilling will jest glow

And this won is just prefect two -
my new spill chick, he toll me sew
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About This Poem

Last Few Words: just having a bit of fun ...

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

Comments

yahoooo!!!

You'v reelly improved deer judy. Congts. on having this knew friend.
Mutch fun indeed...Hahaha.
( such a funny poem needs a bit of fun comment)

Judy

A fun write I wonder what school of thought this came from, and did they only teach arithmetic lol.
Loved it, I think there are a few right mistakes you must pay more attention lol,
Yours Yenti