Ruby Lord
Ruby Lord
Jun 12, 2023
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My Tat Tits

Poem Body

My tattoos, bitter and mild
Never able to feed a child
Older now with veins of blue
You won’t find beer in the tit tattoo

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Country/Region: United Kingdom

Favorite Poets: I like Margaret Atwoods poetry and I enjoy her writing. She has a natural ability to make her fiction read like poetry, if you read closely you will see it., I have a good understanding of the English language but I don't always follow the rules as I can be a little lazy and sometimes I'm just tired., I've been inspired reading the poetry on Neopoet and have enjoyed analysing other people's work.

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Geezer

of some women that I know. I am/was a biker and my wife has tattoos. We are all older now, and the tattoos that we all have are spread out, and I see them as they have gone from early twenties, to now in the late fifties and sixties. Yep, I recognize them from your description, LoL ~ Geez.
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Geezer

IF... the right one comes along, it will be the right one! As Obi says, Au natural is very becoming in its own right. My wife didn't get her first one until about fifteen years ago, and we have been together almost forty years! Now, she has three! [I have nine
not including cover-ups of crude tats]. It is interesting that you still entertain the idea of getting one. ~ Geez.
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Seren

Seren

1 year 10 months ago

I was a biker and biker's wife once upon a time, yet I have never found that tattoo that I felt was ME, I think this is a brilliant I absolutely love this one. All my girls have tats and have pestered me for years to get one and I have always said I will, but it will be the right one for me. I'm a picky bitch.

I too see your tats.

Kind Regards

Seren

Obadiah Grey

I'm still a biker!
and can categorically state here and now!!
There ain't no tattoo that exists that
that enhances a wondrous woman's tits!!!
Though, I'm willing to be proven wrong,
just send some pics, n I'll smoke yer bong!!!

I think this is perhaps deeper and more personal than my flippant comment addresses.

Obi.