Poem Body
At times when
we want to please
all people
we make our lives
biggest mistake
we can't please each
and
every one of 7.5 billion,
if we can't please ourselves
who else
Jan 28, 2014
Please me darling!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Well said!
Pleasing every one is simply the impossible mission.
I feel this needs a bit working to give it a more poetic voice
but perhaps it's only me.
Thanks for sharing.
no its not only you
it's my laziness
which drags along with me
and
then anchors all my poetry