Poem Body
To the last sight and the last sigh
I would climb, my one great desire
being growth.
And when I can rise no farther,
when death demands its last breath,
I would disperse my energies
and give gently away.
But my Creator -till the day
that my joy re-enters Yours
give me growth and its hope
And if perchance
I begin to stink
as the stagnant pool
let me not be deceived
but cut me cleanly away
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