Poem Body
Quest to see
your eyes......
I have seen many eyes
they speak nothing
but the truth
mine speak of love and youth..
my eyes
I thought were beautiful,
till I saw in her eyes so blue...
so lovely and so sparkingly true
the babe was tromping about...
as if in ones youth
the pet had eyes blue
better than mine
how glad I am
all now knew.
our eyes are blue
Comments
Loved
A quietly good piece, have I read this one before ???
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T
Yes I think so
pending for a week
hanging or drowning in the stream
which?/
Hi loved
Excellent use of rhyme in a free form poem. The end kinda fades out though..............stan
rivers of freedom have ripples
they rise and fall like empires
but the end none can control
neither you nor I
the fading life
must endure
what is there to ensure????