Lavender
Lavender
Jun 06, 2024

Raspberry Blue Sorbet

Poem Body

It flows like honey down my throat,
dissolves into a river of rapture
spinning, swirling, and caressing
my imagination, inviting me on a wild ride
through chiffon curtains and breezy clouds.

I close my eyes and disappear into
its royal purple,
its majestic red,
its loyal blue.

I am smitten by its affection as it whispers
bold promises to keep me safe, and calm,
...alive and happy.

I fancy myself to be a sassy yellow bowl
as it spoons its essence into my senses,
sweet and fresh,

like the first taste of tomorrow.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

10 months 3 weeks ago

of a child that my mother baby-sat many years ago. Whenever you fed him something he really enjoyed, he would clench and unclench his hands, screw his face up into the most beatific grins and almost crow. I used to beg my mother to let me feed him, because I so loved to see the soul of his appetite. Nicely done, and thanks for the return of a great memory. ~ Geez.
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Rula

Rula

10 months 3 weeks ago

What a yummy tittle!
It gave a watering mouth reading this throughout and the ending is bit a unexpected and therefore very clever indeed.
Always great to read tasty poems.
Thank you for sharing

Lavender

It's amazing how glorious fruit tastes. Mother Nature is phenomenal!
Thank you for reading!
Lx

Leslie

Leslie

10 months 3 weeks ago

Very nice L as always!