Rosewood Apothecary
Rosewood Apothecary
Jul 04, 2023

Realignment

Poem Body

Re-centering
Rethinking
Relaxing
Releasing anger

Receptive
Respondent
Resilient
Resourceful

Respectful
Reserved
Requiting
Remarkable

Returning
Rejuvenated
Rehabilitation
Self-Realization

Recognizant
Recovery
Redefined
Redressed

Reclamation
Reconstructed
Repairing
Resplendent

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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

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Comments

Geezer

and I'm not sure if it was purposeful or accidental. I see that you have one break from the R's, and I wondered if it might be to provide that break and accent the [self] or just that you couldn't figure out a way to say it so that it began with an R. If it is that you need a way to begin it with an R, then I would say, [Realization of self]. You seem much more energetic and sure of yourself, than in recent times. I hope that your adjustment of attitude is one strength and renewal. Good work!
~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary

I’m ok with the break in the pattern. I do like your suggestion that maybe it’s to accent that line which I never planned on. Now that you’ve mentioned it it’s so obvious and effective.

Good looks as always
Tim

Lavender

Hello, Tim,
Love this! Really like the break with "Self-Realization." To me, it's the most important element.
Thank you!
L

Candlewitch

this seams like a good check-list for reaffirming the vows to one-self!

*hugs & love, Cat