Poem Body
What would I have
without poetry?
A small mind,
a dismissed whim,
an unspoken belief,
a reflection in the mirror
of someone I do not know.
What would I have
without poetry?
A small mind,
a dismissed whim,
an unspoken belief,
a reflection in the mirror
of someone I do not know.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Lady Lavender
very descriptive... I understand completely...
*hugs, Cat
Hello, Cat,
How are you? I know you can relate to poetry being such an integral part of your life! Thank you, as always, for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Lx
real power, very concise. I
real power, very concise. I loved it, and I am sensitive to much of it.
Poetry can definitely help to know the world, and oneself.
Tyro
Hello, Tyro,
Who would we truly be, if not poets? Thank you for reading! I'm always grateful!
L
Short and catchy. Straight to
Short and catchy. Straight to the point
Hello,Amo,
I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Thank you very much!
L
I love this
Poetry is such a great outlet for our emotions and our soul. Sometimes it does one good to constructively purge our thoughts through writing. As always, an elegant, gentle write. Well done.
Hello, RoseBlack!
I agree! Poetry is a wonderful outlet! Sometimes, the BEST outlet!
Thank you for reading!
Lx
Poetry clearly demonstrates
Poetry clearly demonstrates who we are and how we think.
Short but effective.
I loved your poem
Hello, Clentin,
Thank you so much for reading. Poetry definitely helps me understand my mind, heart and soul. I'm glad you could relate to this.
L