Poem Body
The Queen had a touch of Flu
the King fed her a spicy stew
she turned bloody red
jumped out of her bed
then rushed to the palatial loo
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The Queen had a touch of Flu
the King fed her a spicy stew
she turned bloody red
jumped out of her bed
then rushed to the palatial loo
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rush Indeed
This is what a limerick should be, humouros to fit the jaunty beat. I have seen elsewhere that limericks can be serious. Seriously? Let topic dictate rhythm and nowhere can my mind connect a solemn subject matter with a happy beat.
Thanks Keith for your time,
Thanks Keith for your time, read and appreciative comment...
Regards,
Raj
great fun indeed. I am not sure if you can post two submission. Why don't you choose the one you're more happy with?
Hehehe Rula...I am posting
Hehehe Rula...I am posting these for fun only and try my hand at this form of poetry...good to know you found this funny...raj