Poem Body
Celebration
Of
Two years
Two hearts
One
Name
Coming
Of
Two
Together
Oneness
Nirvana
Mar 24, 2012
Second Anniversary
About This Poem
Last Few Words: a couple of acrostics, written for my husband, in celebration of our wedding anniversary :)
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
A sweet memory dropping down
A sweet memory dropping down the page like a lovely little water colour painting.
Nordic cloud.
a sweet memory indeed dear
a sweet memory indeed dear Ann, I like what you wrote about a 'lovely little watercolour' :) I hope there will be a large collection of these Anniversary acrostics to help us both remember, much love to you xxx
Nice thoughts,
Nice thoughts well written, hope you have many more years in nirvana. Regards Roscoe..
how clever beki
to use cotton
nice acrostics
happy anniversary for whenever it was
may you stay in your nirvana for forever xx
love judy
Beki
Lovely way to hold those two years wrapped up with Cotton.
Take care of you, Young Moonraker,
Yours in Exile, Ian.T