Carl Halling
Carl Halling
Oct 31, 2020

Seems You Found love

Poem Body

Oh, at long last I’ve found you,
Only the news is far from good,
Seems you found love,
You seem happy, and so fulfilled,
But did I think that
You’d be lonely for all those years?

Oh, what was I looking for?
You tried so hard, but I never thawed,
Seems you found love,
You seem happy, and so fulfilled,
I never knew what I found,
And what I lost, and how much I’d miss you.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: London Metropolitan Area.

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare, John Keats, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Percy Bysshe Shelley, Oscar Wilde, John Berryman.

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Comments

Carl Halling

Teddy, thank you for your encouraging and insightful words, I'm so pleased my writings have that effect, which was of course the intention. Carl.