Zeussirius
Aug 18, 2018
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Soliloquy of Love.

Poem Body

If Faustus would give all souls for Mephistopheles,
i would give all the World for her love,
I will even shatter the laws of physics,
if she be Linette I'll turn myself to dove,
like Jason i will venture for the golden Fleece,
like Kratos i will overthrow Jove,
like Sin bad i will sail the deadly seas,
all these and more will i do for her love,
if she's the devil then I'll gladly sell my soul,
i will fight epic battles greater than the trojan war,
i want her so badly not friendship i want more,
for my love for her is like a black hole,
so i scream my love till my throat gets sore,
i am ready for a priest my intentions are pure.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is my first sonnet and one of my 1st poems ever, I wrote it 7 years ago, I was still learning about rhymes and how to write so be nice while criticizing.

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Abuja,Nigeria., NGA

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare William Wordsworth, Wole Soyinka, John Milton.

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