sounds of trumpets

your theme, but have a few thoughts about how to make it a little bit more readable.
I would eliminate the second stanza, as you describe the music as being the exact opposite as in the first.
I would also re-write the line that starts the third. [ I would leave off the [but still,]. The proper form that should be used for "extempore" would be [extemporized]. I really liked the lines that go: I hear sounds from a distance to far. I hope that you work this over a bit, because you have the start of something really good here. ~ Gee

Your teme shows a restlessness in your ways, as if you cannot rest well or sleep when you should.
Still not sure where you are or what time zone but I always listen to music last thing at night when writing, even at this moment Peace Pipe by the shadows is playing in my head, see I must be able to multi task, so all those nasty things that women say about them being able to multi task and we can't are untrue lol.
As Gee says this needs a little attention spread it a little add some oomph to it, draw on those spiky bits, it is more lullaby than wake up call.
Sorry it is morning here now so I is awake lol.
Take care young Bard glad you missed me,
Yours Ian.T

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Th e trumpets are hollow [The trumpets are hollow]

he he he I know the song well Loved, big smile nicely done :)

love Jayne x