Obadiah Grey
Obadiah Grey
Feb 24, 2023

Soup.

Poem Body

Eminent professors ev-ery-where,
even those bound to the chair,
all agree whid liddle ol' me-
we'll all be fucked even-tu-ally,

We're gonna die - we're gonna fry
pucker up n kiss yer arse g'bye.
it's difficult to comprehend
jus' when this shit is gonna end,

In a ball o' fire we're in the mire-
JEYZUS MAN,, we'll all expire !!
it may be quick o'er in flick;
clock is ticking tick tock tick,

Or it maybe slow the way ya go
- jus' 'nuf time fer one more blow,

either ways it's fair to say
we're gonna end up - - consommé.

Obi

About This Poem

Last Few Words: With brown bread.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: int'topfield, GBR

Favorite Poets: Felix Dennis, Brian Bilston,

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Comments

Seren

Seren

2 years 2 months ago

We are screwed one day, I think I want it slow. not quick. I want to be able to sit back with a bourbon and embrace whatever end comes my way.

This is a cracker!! I can't see one thing I would change.

Bravo! & to a slow end, cheers!

Kind Regards Jayne

Obadiah Grey

So, Jayne, let me get this straight,,,,
One day in the future, you'd like an alcohol
induced embrace followed by a slow screw
with a big end coming your way ?

Hee hee, God bless you !!!

I've been at the bourbon again,,, love, Obi.

Lavender

Obi,
it's been well said,
"Best of Luck, and Amen!"
Now pass the brown bread!
L

Triskelion

Obi Soup

the diner is serving a new soup du jour
it's broth is the froth from a gentleman's sewer
sautéed with his guts
au flambé on his butt
and his nuts that come grilled on a skewer!

Sorry, can't help myself. Keep that rhythm n rhyme going!

Thomas

Ruby Lord

What I really liked - You're offensive and arse kicking tone and profane words hammered that message home, excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.

You're definitely one to watch out for :) Ruby x