sympathetic gesture in pennies

Poem Body

perched upon a pallet
each powerful pull
prompting further
his pickled pitch of pep

all promises
proclamations
played out
and unproductive

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Austin, TX, USA

A sound, effective piece, elegantly written. Great title.
proclomations [proclamations].

Hope to see more of you.