Lavender
Lavender
Apr 24, 2020

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Can you teach someone
how to write a poem?
I'd like to know.
For me, a poem simply shows itself.
It plods its heavy boots
down the creaky
staircase of my mind
and then drags its weathered soles
across the page until
it comes to the end of the line.
Or a poem may rise
from the fire pit in my gut
and pour itself out -
bubbling, burning the page
until all is ash,
quiet and still.
But most of the time
it bellows from my heart,
exhales and crescendos
over the page
until it rests, needing nothing more...
like the final note of a song.
Can you teach that?
I'd like to know.
And then I'd like to learn
how to fly.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I haven't discovered a title. It is a simple poem, with an honest question. Thank you!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Lavender

Thank you for reading and helping me with this, Jerry!

I look forward to spending time here!

Lavender

Lavender

Thank you, Mark!

I know just a smidgen about poetry and can see from this site, and from you, that there are endless bounties to learn. I am eager to read more poetry and to sharpen my skills.

Thank you, again.

Lavender

Geezer

to describe writing a poem! I agree that you have skills and I hope that you find everything that you want here. I'm sure that
you will fit in here very well. There will be plenty of opportunities to stretch your legs and give voice to the poetry in your heart. I hope that you will enjoy being a part of the Neo. family. Welcome. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender

Thank you, Geezer!

I feel very welcomed by you, and the site, itself. During this solitary time, it is so nice to have distractions that we love and will help us grow. Thank you for reading!

Lavender

Lavender

I feel so much of a poem starts inside and then reveals itself. I also agree that it takes skill to hone the words from a feeling, into a poem, and then back into a feeling from the reader. Thank you for reading and sharing your suggestions for a title!
Lavender