Can you teach someone
how to write a poem?
I'd like to know.
For me, a poem simply shows itself.
It plods its heavy boots
down the creaky
staircase of my mind
and then drags its weathered soles
across the page until
it comes to the end of the line.
Or a poem may rise
from the fire pit in my gut
and pour itself out -
bubbling, burning the page
until all is ash,
quiet and still.
But most of the time
it bellows from my heart,
exhales and crescendos
over the page
until it rests, needing nothing more...
like the final note of a song.
Can you teach that?
I'd like to know.
And then I'd like to learn
how to fly.
Apr 24, 2020
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: I haven't discovered a title. It is a simple poem, with an honest question. Thank you!
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Many thanks!
Thank you for reading and helping me with this, Jerry!
I look forward to spending time here!
Lavender
I would suggest quiet and
I would suggest quiet and still rather than using and quiet and still
otherwise you have a very descriptive poem nicely worded
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Good morning!
Your suggestion is very helpful. I agree the rhythm and flow is much smoother.
Thank you!
Lavender
Thank you!
Thank you, Mark!
I know just a smidgen about poetry and can see from this site, and from you, that there are endless bounties to learn. I am eager to read more poetry and to sharpen my skills.
Thank you, again.
Lavender
Such exciting ways...
to describe writing a poem! I agree that you have skills and I hope that you find everything that you want here. I'm sure that
you will fit in here very well. There will be plenty of opportunities to stretch your legs and give voice to the poetry in your heart. I hope that you will enjoy being a part of the Neo. family. Welcome. ~ Geezer.
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Thank you!
Thank you, Geezer!
I feel very welcomed by you, and the site, itself. During this solitary time, it is so nice to have distractions that we love and will help us grow. Thank you for reading!
Lavender
Hello Teddy!
I feel so much of a poem starts inside and then reveals itself. I also agree that it takes skill to hone the words from a feeling, into a poem, and then back into a feeling from the reader. Thank you for reading and sharing your suggestions for a title!
Lavender